My Family
原文:I have a small family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a teacher. He is tall. My mother is a nurse. She is kind. I am a student. I love my family.
创意改写:
Hello! I want to tell you about my warm little nest. In my family, there are three special members. My dad is a super teacher! He stands tall like a friendly giant and knows answers to almost everything. My mom works in a hospital. She wears a white uniform and has the kindest smile that can make any hurt feel better. I’m their only child, a busy middle school student. Our home is always full of laughter and the smell of mom’s cooking. We are like three pieces of a happy puzzle that fit together perfectly. I really love my small but wonderful family.