2013湖北高考英语作文题目核心话题:青年创业 (Youth Entrepreneurship)
那年的英语作文题材料大意是:假如你是李华,你和同学讨论了“毕业后是否应自主创业”,请根据讨论结果给校报英文栏目写一封信。要点包括:1. 有人支持创业(如实现梦想、锻炼能力);2. 有人反对(如缺乏经验、风险高);3. 你的看法。
你要的“满分范文”和“评分标准”直接上干货:
一、评分标准(高考阅卷版)
1. 内容分(7分):必须覆盖材料所有要点(支持/反对/个人观点),缺一点扣2分。
2. 结构分(6分):分段清晰(三段式:现象概述+正反观点+个人立场),衔接词(however, personally)用错扣分。
3. 语言分(7分):语法错误(时态、主谓一致)一个扣0.5分,高级词汇(如 pursue dreams、financial risks)加分。
4. 卷面分(5分):字迹潦草直接降档,单词涂改超3处扣1分。
二、满分范文(带标题)
标题:Should We Start Business After Graduation?
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class had a heated discussion about whether to start our own business after graduation. Views vary from person to person.
Some students are in favor of it. They believe self-employment can help realize personal dreams and develop practical skills, such as communication and problem-solving. What’s more, it brings freedom and creativity. However, others hold the opposite view. They argue that young graduates lack experience and financial support, which may lead to high risks of failure. Also, the pressure could be overwhelming.
Personally, I think the decision depends on individual situations. If one has a mature project and enough preparation, entrepreneurship is worth trying. Otherwise, gaining work experience first might be wiser. Let’s make choices based on reality.
Yours,
Li Hua
套路句式(拿来就用)
高频考点(2013年关联知识点)
1. 词汇:entrepreneurship(创业)、financial risks(财务风险)、practical skills(实践技能)。
——说完即停。