（全国卷I题目：假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历，给外教Mr. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改格式和措辞。）
Dear Mr. Jenkins,
I’m writing to ask for your help. I plan to work part-time at a foreign trade company this summer vacation, and I’ve already prepared my application letter and resume. However, I’m not confident about the formatting and wording, so I’d really appreciate it if you could spare some time to polish them for me.
As you know, I’ve always been interested in international business, and this job would be a great chance to put my English into practice. I hope to make my documents look professional and clear. Could you please give me some advice on how to improve them?
Thank you for your guidance and support! I’m available anytime next week. Please let me know when suits you best.
Yours,
Li Hua
评分标准（高分关键）：
1. 内容完整——覆盖所有要点：目的（求助修改）、背景（兼职申请）、请求（提建议）、感谢。
2. 结构清晰——三段式：开门见山说目的→解释原因→礼貌结尾。
3. 语言流畅——用衔接词（However, As you know）、从句（if you could...）、短语（put into practice）。
4. 零错误——无拼写、语法、标点错误，时态统一（一般现在时、将来时）。
5. 加分句式：
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