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2020高考英语全国一卷作文范文及评分标准解读

题目:你校将举办英语演讲比赛,主题为“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Story”。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1. 故事简介;2. 你喜欢它的原因。满分范文(带标题):The Legend of the W...

题目:你校将举办英语演讲比赛,主题为“My Favorite Chinese Traditional Story”。请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:1. 故事简介;2. 你喜欢它的原因。

满分范文(带标题):

The Legend of the White Snake: A Tale of Love and Courage

Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to share my favorite Chinese traditional story, “The Legend of the White Snake”.

This story is about a white snake spirit, Bai Suzhen, who takes human form. She falls in love with a young man named Xu Xian and marries him. However, a monk named Fahai tries to separate them, believing spirits and humans shouldn’t be together. Bai Suzhen fights bravely to protect her love and family, even causing a flood, but is ultimately trapped under a pagoda. Her story is not just a fantasy; it shows deep love, courage, and the struggle against rigid rules.

The reason I love this story is simple. Bai Suzhen isn’t a typical “good” or “bad” character. Her actions make you think. She breaks the rules for love, which is both brave and complicated. This makes the story feel real and powerful, even though it’s a legend. It teaches us that true strength comes from fighting for what we care about.

Thank you.

评分标准解读(高考阅卷版):

1. 内容要点分(0-7分): 必须完整覆盖两个要点:“故事简介”和“原因”。少一个直接掉档。简介不用长,但关键人物、情节得有。原因不能只写“It’s interesting”,要具体,比如“shows the value of persistence”、“teaches me about kindness”。

2. 结构与连贯分(0-6分): 必须分段!开头打招呼+点题,中间至少两段对应两个要点,结尾感谢。用上“First,” “Moreover,” “Therefore”这些词,但别多,一两处就行。句子之间要有逻辑,别东一句西一句。

3. 语言质量分(0-7分): 这是高分关键。拼写、语法不能有硬伤。想冲高分,就得用点高级货:从句(who takes human form)、非谓语(believing spirits and humans shouldn’t...)、强调句(It is her courage that...)、准确词汇(fantasy, rigid, complicated)。用错不如不用。

4. 卷面与字数(扣分项): 字丑没关系,必须清楚!字数不到80或超过120都扣分。标点乱用也扣。

直接用的口诀和套路句式:

开头模板: “Good morning, judges and fellow students! Today, I’m thrilled to talk about...”

引出故事: “The story revolves around... who...”、“It tells a touching tale of...”

陈述原因: “What draws me to this story is not just..., but also...”、“The reason lies in its powerful message that...”

结尾模板: “That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.”

高频救命词汇: represent(代表), embody(体现), value(价值观), perseverance(坚持), compassion(同情), profound(深刻的), fascinating(迷人的)。

时间节点:

高考考试时间(2020年): 7月7日-8日(因疫情延期)。

打印准考证时间: 一般在考前一周,6月底至7月初。

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建议先抓核心知识点,再看例题或表达方式,复习时可结合范文素材和作文栏目一起使用。

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