大作文是看图画写作。图画内容是一场足球赛的点球时刻。守门员觉得球门巨大自己很渺小,而罚球球员觉得球门很小守门员像个巨人。题目要求写一篇160-200字的文章,需要1)简要描述图画;2)解释其深层含义;3)用例子支持你的观点。
小作文是写一封建议信,给你大学的图书馆提改善服务的建议。
怎么写高分(硬核干货):
大作文高分套路:
1. 描述图画别偷懒:至少写两句话!一句总览(点球场景),再把守门员和球员的想法各描述一句。不描述或只写一句直接扣分。
2. 主题别跑偏:这幅画讲的是“自信”、“面对挑战的态度”或“看待问题的角度”。只要围绕这些写,就算沾边,不会因为观点“不对”扣分。
3. 结构按提纲来:第一段描述图画;第二段分析意义(别在这段举例子!);第三段举例论证。老老实实跟着三点走,结构分就稳了。
4. 语言是爹!:阅卷老师最看重的是语言对不对、好不好,其次才是结构,内容思想深度排最后。你句子写得漂亮、词汇丰富多变,比啥深刻立意都管用。
5. 例子别写记叙文:第三段举例,要有主题句,例子叙述中夹杂议论,最后小结。
6. 字数必须写够:要求160-200字,字数不够猛扣分!少10个字就扣一分,字少了内容肯定展不开,扣得更狠。答题卡反面有22行,尽量写满16行以上。
7. 字迹工整能救命:卷面干净、字迹清楚,同样的内容分数可能更高。别用快没水的笔写,别写一个字点一个点,阅卷老师看得头疼。
小作文高分要点:
1. 格式别错:右上角日期可写可不写,但不能写在信件末尾。开头的称呼(Dear...)和最后的落款(Yours sincerely, Li Ming)必须有。
2. 要点要写全:题目里的要求(比如提建议)必须全部覆盖,漏一个就扣分。
3. 字数卡好:要求约100词,低于90词要扣分。答题卡正面小作文部分只有12行,把称呼紧挨着题号“51”写,落款至少有一行写到12行下面的空白处,显得刚好写满。
满分范文示例(大作文):
Self-confidence in the Face of Challenges
It is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon that a striker is preparing to shoot at the goal defended by a goalkeeper on a football field. In the goalkeeper’s mind, he is so much smaller than he actually is that guarding the goal becomes a mission impossible. On the contrary, the giant guard seems to fill up the whole goal in the attacking player’s mind.
The purpose of the drawing is to show us that in the face of seemingly insurmountable challenges or predicament, possessing self-confidence is of utmost significance. Regardless of how much success one has had in school or at work, there are bound to be times when he or she will encounter difficulties and problems. It is at these critical times that his self-confidence plays a crucial role.
Take the process of learning as an example. Students often need to memorize vast amounts of information, such as the Chemical Elements Periodic Table or complex mathematical formulae. Many quickly become discouraged, complaining about the difficulty and are ready to give up. However, those who eventually succeed are the ones who believe in their own ability from the start. They approach the task with courage and are willing to keep trying, soon discovering that the more they practice, the easier it becomes. This demonstrates how a confident mindset can transform a daunting challenge into a manageable task.
In conclusion, to navigate through life's obstacles successfully, we must cultivate self-confidence, assess situations rationally, and have the courage to persevere.
满分范文示例(小作文):
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to raise some suggestions for improving the service of our university library.
Generally speaking, the library functions well, but there are still several problems. To begin with, more librarians should work in the circulation hall so that students can borrow and return books more quickly. In addition, the opening hours should be lengthened so that more students can take advantage of the library. Last but not least, the computer room should be expanded so that more students can gain access to the Intranet and the Internet.
I will be grateful if my suggestions receive your favorable consideration, and I firmly believe that the service level will be improved significantly in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming