题目： 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter对中国传统节日很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件介绍一个节日。
满分范文：
The Mid-Autumn Festival: A Time for Reunion
Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to hear about your interest in Chinese festivals. Now let me paint you a picture of the Mid-Autumn Festival, which falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month.
Imagine a night when the moon is at its roundest and brightest. Families gather, sharing mooncakes—delicious pastries with rich fillings like red bean or lotus seed paste. We admire the moon, thinking of distant relatives. The festival is all about reunion and expressing best wishes.
What’s more, there are enchanting legends behind it. The most famous one is about Chang’e, who flew to the moon. Kids love hearing these stories.
I bet you’d love the joyful atmosphere. If you ever visit China during this time, you’re more than welcome to join my family for celebration!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
高分秘籍（评分标准核心点）：
1. 结构清： 开门见山→节日介绍（时间、活动、意义）→文化内涵→结尾邀请，段落分明。
2. 内容全： 覆盖题目所有要点，并用细节（如月饼口味、传说人物）充实。
3. 语言亮： 用上“falls on”, “paint you a picture”, “What’s more”, “I bet you’d love…” 这种地道句式。
4. 衔接顺： “Now let me…”, “which…”, “What’s more…” 连接词让文章读起来流畅。
5. 零错误： 语法、拼写一个不错，卷面干净。