就是“On the Way to School”,让你写篇短文,围绕“讲求文明,从我做起”这个主题扯。具体得写两件事:1.遵守交通法规;2.注意举止文明。词数120左右,题目已经给你了,写的时候不能暴露自己信息。
怎么写能拿高分
1. 结构直接套:开头点题,中间分两段对应题目两个要求,结尾总结呼吁,别搞花里胡哨的。中间段落可以用“First and foremost,… Moreover,…”这种词连起来。
2. 内容使劲编细节:别光说“要遵守交规”,写具体点。比如“我”看到红灯,即使没车也停下等;骑自行车不逆行、不戴耳机;过马路走斑马线还帮老人提东西。举止文明那块,可以写不乱扔垃圾、公交车上给孕妇让座、对同学老师主动问好。
3. 句式别太low:简单句基础上,掺几个定语从句(比如“The red light, which I always respect, reminds me of safety.”)、状语从句(“Only when everyone follows the rules can we have a better environment.”)。被动语态也用上,像“Traffic rules are made to protect us.”
4. 词儿换高级的:把“obey”换成“abide by”,“good”换成“civilized”或“decent”,“important”换成“crucial”或“essential”。开头别再用“With the development of society”了,直接“Nowadays, cultivating civilized behavior has become a social concern. As for me, it starts on my way to school.”
5. 卷面是命根:字可以不漂亮,但必须工整清晰,别涂改。段落分明,一行写到底难看得要死。
附一篇能照着学的范文(题目“On the Way to School”)
Nowadays, the call for social civilization is growing louder. As a student, I believe we should take the lead, and the journey to school offers a perfect starting point.
First and foremost, obeying traffic rules is fundamental for our safety and social order. I make it a habit to wait patiently at red lights even when no cars are in sight. Riding my bike, I keep to the right side and never wear earphones. What’s more, I always use the crosswalk and sometimes help the elderly cross the road. These actions not only protect me but also set a good example for others.
Moreover, civilized behavior on the way reflects our character. I never litter; instead, I put waste into the bin. On the crowded bus, I offer my seat to those in need, like pregnant women or the elderly. A friendly *ile and a “good morning” to clas*ates and school guards can also brighten everyone’s day. These *all gestures, taken together, make our community warmer and more pleasant.
In short, the way to school is not just a physical journey. It’s a daily practice of responsibility and kindness. Let’s all contribute to a more civilized society, starting from our very next step out of home.