题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter来信说他想了解中国学生的课余生活。请给他写一封回信,介绍你们学校学生的主要课余活动及其好处。
满分范文:
Title: A Glimpse into Our After-School Life
Dear Peter,
I was glad to receive your letter asking about our after-school life. Here’s a quick look at what we usually do.
First off, sports are huge. Basketball, football, and running dominate the playground right after school. It’s our prime time to sweat, de-stress, and bond with classmates. Then there’re all sorts of clubs, like English corner, robotics, and painting. I’m in the debate club, which really boosts my thinking and speaking skills. Also, many of us volunteer on weekends, visiting nursing homes or tutoring kids. It’s fulfilling and teaches us responsibility.
The best part? These activities aren’t just fun. They keep us healthy, expand our social circles, and make us more well-rounded. We’re not just study machines!
Hope this gives you a clear picture. Looking forward to hearing about your free time too.
Yours,
Li Hua
评分标准干货:
1. 内容要点全:必须覆盖课余活动类型、具体例子、好处。
2. 结构要清晰:分段写,有开头问候、主体分点、结尾呼应。
3. 语言得地道:用简单句+连接词(like, then, also, which),避免大词。
4. 字数控制好:100词左右,少废话。
5. 卷面别乱画:写工整,涂改要少。
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真题答案要点(2010湖北卷书面表达):
关键词:after-school activities, clubs, sports, volunteer, benefit。