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升学考试 湖北2010高考英语书面表达范文参考

湖北2010高考英语书面表达范文参考

题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter来信说他想了解中国学生的课余生活。请给他写一封回信,介绍你们学校学生的主要课余活动及其好处。满分范文:Title: A Glimpse into Our Afte

题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter来信说他想了解中国学生的课余生活。请给他写一封回信,介绍你们学校学生的主要课余活动及其好处。

满分范文:

Title: A Glimpse into Our After-School Life

Dear Peter,

I was glad to receive your letter asking about our after-school life. Here’s a quick look at what we usually do.

First off, sports are huge. Basketball, football, and running dominate the playground right after school. It’s our prime time to sweat, de-stress, and bond with classmates. Then there’re all sorts of clubs, like English corner, robotics, and painting. I’m in the debate club, which really boosts my thinking and speaking skills. Also, many of us volunteer on weekends, visiting nursing homes or tutoring kids. It’s fulfilling and teaches us responsibility.

The best part? These activities aren’t just fun. They keep us healthy, expand our social circles, and make us more well-rounded. We’re not just study machines!

Hope this gives you a clear picture. Looking forward to hearing about your free time too.

Yours,

Li Hua

评分标准干货:

1. 内容要点全:必须覆盖课余活动类型、具体例子、好处。

2. 结构要清晰:分段写,有开头问候、主体分点、结尾呼应。

3. 语言得地道:用简单句+连接词(like, then, also, which),避免大词。

4. 字数控制好:100词左右,少废话。

5. 卷面别乱画:写工整,涂改要少。

高频考点与套路句式(直接背):

  • 开头句:I’m writing to tell you about... / Glad to hear from you.
  • 列举活动:First,... Besides,... What’s more,...
  • 说好处:It helps us to... / This is a great way to...
  • 结尾句:Hope this helps. / Looking forward to your reply.
  • 真题答案要点(2010湖北卷书面表达):

  • 内容:必须包含体育活动、社团活动、志愿活动中的至少两类,并说明好处。
  • 格式:书信格式(称呼、结尾、署名)。
  • 关键词:after-school activities, clubs, sports, volunteer, benefit。

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