标题:写给未来自己的信
假设你是李华,请你给十年后的自己写一封信,主要内容包括:
1. 回顾当前的生活与梦想;
2. 想象十年后的变化与成就;
3. 询问未来自己一些问题,并表达鼓励。
满分范文:
A Letter to My Future Self
Dear Future Me,
How is everything going? I'm writing this letter as your 18-year-old self, sitting at the desk preparing for the upcoming Gaokao. Right now, my life is filled with both pressure and hope, dreaming of becoming a software engineer to create something that helps people.
I imagine you ten years later must have experienced a lot. Perhaps you've graduated from university, started your career, or even traveled to places I can only dream of now. I really hope you have stayed curious and kept learning, turning some of our old dreams into reality.
I do have some questions for you: Are you happy with the choices you've made? Do you still keep in touch with our high school friends? Most importantly, have you become someone young me would be proud of?
No matter what, I want you to know that the 18-year-old you is working hard for our future. Keep going, stay brave, and never forget the passion you have today.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(From the past, June 2018)
评分标准干货
1. 内容要点分(15分):三点内容(当前生活、未来想象、提问鼓励)少一点扣5分。
2. 结构分(10分):分段清晰,开头结尾有信件格式(称呼/落款),少一个格式点扣2分。
3. 语言分(15分):用几个高级词(如“curious”,“passion”),来俩复合句(如“I imagine you...”,“Do you still...”),避免重复简单词。
4. 卷面分(5分):字写工整,别涂改,够字数(100词左右)。
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范文别死背,改几个词变成自己的,考场直接套。说完拉倒。