题目:假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校课外活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.活动种类;2.你最喜爱的活动及原因;3.活动对你的影响。
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标题:A Glimpse into Our After-School Life
Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to share with you the vibrant after-school activities at my school. We have a wide range of options, from sports like basketball and swimming to clubs for music, debate, and robotics.
My favorite is the debate club. Why? It pushes me to think critically and express ideas clearly under pressure. Plus, I’ve made friends with brilliant minds who challenge my perspectives.
These activities have shaped me profoundly. They’ve boosted my confidence, taught me teamwork, and made my school life far more than just textbooks. Hope this gives you a clear picture!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
评分标准
1. 内容完整度:三点信息全覆盖,少一点扣分。
2. 语言表达:用连接词(from…to…, plus, and)、从句,避免简单句堆砌。
3. 结构:分三段,开头寒暄+内容点+结尾总结。
4. 卷面:字迹乱直接降档。
答题技巧
1. 套模板:开头“I’m thrilled to…”,中间“My favorite is…because…”,结尾“These activities have…”。
2. 高频词:replace “like” with “such as”, use “profoundly” instead of “a lot”。
3. 蒙题口诀:要点没写完?硬凑也要写满三点,少一点扣3分。
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其他需求对应回答
说完即停。