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2013高考英语作文真题范文,看看当年满分作文长啥样

标题:A Letter of ThanksDear Mr. Smith,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous donation to our schoo...

标题:A Letter of Thanks

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your generous donation to our school library. The new books you provided have not only enriched our collection but also opened a window to a wider world for all of us.

Before your donation, our library lacked many up-to-date and valuable resources. Students often found it hard to access the materials needed for their studies and research. Now, with the arrival of these wonderful books, the situation has completely changed. The quiet reading room is always full of students eager to explore knowledge. I personally have benefited greatly from several science books, which helped me win first prize in a recent competition.

Your kindness means more than just books; it shows your deep care for education and youth. It teaches us the importance of sharing and contributing to society. We are all deeply moved and inspired by your action. We promise to make good use of every book and strive to become valuable members of society in the future, just like you.

Thank you again for your incredible support.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

为啥这篇能满分?

  • 完全符合书信格式,开头结尾规矩。
  • 内容紧扣“感谢捐赠图书”这个题目要求,不跑题。
  • 段落清楚:感谢→说明捐赠前情况→捐赠带来的具体变化→升华意义(学到分享精神)→再次感谢。
  • 用词简单但准确(enriched our collection, opened a window, access the materials)。
  • 提到了个人具体例子(帮助比赛获奖),不空泛。
  • 句子连接顺溜,没语法错误。
  • 高考英语作文评分标准核心三句话:

    1. 内容对题不跑偏,要点写全。

    2. 结构清爽分段明,逻辑不乱。

    3. 语法词汇别出错,用词简单点也行,句子别太碎。

    拿分口诀:

    标题格式不能忘,开头直奔主题上。

    三段结构最保险,要点一个一个讲。

    高级词汇塞两个,主要句子稳当先。

    结尾扣题再点题,卷面干净印象强。

    常用套路句式(开头结尾):

  • 开头(写信):I am writing to... / Thank you for...
  • 开头(议论):Recently, a hot topic about... has drawn public attention.
  • 结尾(建议):I hope my suggestions will be of help to you.
  • 结尾(感想):Through this, I have learned that...
  • 高频考点(话题):

    感谢信、建议信、邀请信;讨论现象(手机使用、环保、志愿者活动);看图讲故事。

    阅读提示

    建议先抓核心知识点,再看例题或表达方式,复习时可结合范文素材和作文栏目一起使用。

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