题目:假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信询问你校学生课余活动情况。请根据以下提示写一封回信。
提示:1. 主要活动(体育运动、兴趣小组等);2. 你的参与感受;3. 对课余活动的看法。
范文(带标题):
How We Spend Our Spare Time
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you asked about our after-school activities. Now let me share some details.
First, our school offers various sports like basketball and swimming, along with interest groups such as photography and drama. I joined the basketball team last year, which not only keeps me fit but also teaches me teamwork. Besides, I’m in the English club where we watch movies and hold debates. Through these activities, I’ve made friends and improved my skills.
In my opinion, spare-time activities are crucial. They help us relax from study pressure and develop hobbies that textbooks can’t offer. By balancing study and fun, we become more well-rounded.
Hope this answers your questions. Write back soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
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