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题目回放:假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校课外活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1. 课外活动项目;2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因;3. 活动带来的好处。满分范文:A Glimpse into Our After-school A...

题目回放:

假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校课外活动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:

1. 课外活动项目;

2. 你最喜欢的活动及原因;

3. 活动带来的好处。

满分范文:

A Glimpse into Our After-school Activities

Dear Peter,

How’s everything going? In your last letter, you asked about our after-school activities. Now I’m thrilled to fill you in!

Our school offers a wide range of activities, from sports like basketball and swimming to clubs such as photography and debate. What’s more, we regularly hold music festivals and science fairs.

My favorite is the volunteering group. Every weekend, we visit local nursing homes to chat with the elderly or help clean up community parks. Why do I love it? It not only brings joy to others but also teaches me responsibility and empathy. Through these experiences, I’ve learned to care for society and work with others.

These activities definitely benefit us a lot. They relieve academic pressure, broaden our horizons, and develop skills that textbooks can’t offer. Personally, I’ve become more outgoing and confident since joining.

Hope this gives you a clear picture. Looking forward to hearing about your school life!

Yours,

Li Hua

评分标准硬核拆解:

  • 内容全:项目、最爱+原因、好处三点写齐,少一点扣分。
  • 结构清:分段直给,别揉成一团。
  • 语言拽:用几个高级词(thrilled, broaden horizons, empathy),但句子要稳,语法别翻车。
  • 字数够:100词左右,少了扣分,多了啰嗦。
  • 拿分口诀:

    开头结尾套模板,三点内容分段干。

    高级词汇塞两个,简单句型保平安。

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    建议先抓核心知识点,再看例题或表达方式,复习时可结合范文素材和作文栏目一起使用。