一、真题题目回顾
2012天津高考英语作文题目(书面表达):
假设你是某中学学生李华,你的美国笔友Mike来信说他对中国春节很感兴趣,请你回信介绍春节。要点包括:1. 春节的时间及意义;2. 主要活动(如贴春联、吃团圆饭、拜年等);3. 邀请他来中国体验春节。
二、满分范文示例
标题:An Invitation to Experience the Spring Festival
Dear Mike,
I was thrilled to receive your letter and to know your interest in the Spring Festival. It’s my great pleasure to give you a brief introduction.
The Spring Festival, falling on the first day of the lunar calendar, is the most significant traditional festival in China. It symbolizes family reunion and new beginnings.
A series of activities mark this festive season. Before the New Year, people clean houses and paste red couplets on doors to drive away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, the whole family gathers for a lavish reunion dinner, enjoying delicious food like dumplings. Then, during the following days, people visit relatives and friends to exchange New Year’s greetings, often giving children lucky money in red envelopes.
The festival is filled with joy and warm wishes. I sincerely invite you to visit China during the next Spring Festival. I promise you’ll be deeply impressed by its unique atmosphere and hospitality.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
三、评分标准硬核拆解
1. 内容要点分(8分):必须全 cover 时间意义、活动(至少2-3项)、邀请。少一个扣大分。
2. 结构逻辑分(4分):分段清晰!开头表明写作目的,中间每段一个主题,结尾重申邀请。用First, Besides, What’s more, Finally连接。
3. 语言运用分(6分):
4. 书写卷面分(2分):字乱、涂改直接在这扣。
四、万能模板句式(书信类)
五、高频考点与坑点
1. 坑点:别把农历(lunar calendar)写成moon calendar。春节专用词:Spring Festival(大写),couplets,reunion dinner,lucky money。
2. 必背句型:It symbolizes/represents... / It is a time when... / Not only... but also...
3. 蒙题技巧:看到“介绍节日/活动”题目,结构直接套:意义+时间→活动(2-3样)+个人体验/感受→邀请/祝愿。字数不够就加细节,比如“dumplings, which symbolize wealth and good fortune”。