作文题目回顾
Part A： 写一封电子邮件给大学国际学生部，建议改善校园内的公共服务。
Part B： 看图写作文——图片内容为一群人围坐餐桌，但各自低头玩手机，无人交流。主题关于科技对人际交流的影响。
Part A 应用文范文（建议信）
Title: Suggestions for Improving Campus Public Services
Dear International Student Office,
I am writing to offer some suggestions for enhancing public services on campus, which would benefit both international and domestic students.
Firstly, more multilingual signs should be placed around campus, especially in key areas like libraries, cafeterias, and administrative buildings. This would help non-Chinese speakers navigate more easily.
Secondly, the campus website needs an improved English version. Currently, much important information is only available in Chinese, which creates difficulties for international students trying to access academic or event updates.
Lastly, establishing a regular “International Student Feedback Forum” would allow direct communication between your office and us, ensuring our concerns are heard promptly.
Thank you for considering these ideas. I believe these changes would make our campus more welcoming and efficient for everyone.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
写作思路：
1. 开头直接表明写信目的——提建议。
2. 中间分点列出具体建议，每点一个简短理由。
3. 结尾礼貌感谢，并强调建议的积极效果。
4. 格式必须完整（称呼、正文、结尾、署名）。
Part B 大作文范文（看图作文）
Title: The Isolated Together
The picture depicts a typical modern scene: several people sit around a dinner table, but instead of talking to each other, they are all absorbed in their *artphones. This image sharply highlights how digital devices, while connecting us virtually, may actually isolate us in real-life social settings.
Technology has undoubtedly brought convenience. We can now easily contact friends far away or access information instantly. However, over-dependence on it is weakening face-to-face communication. As shown in the picture, even in gatherings meant for personal interaction, people often retreat into their digital worlds. This can lead to a decline in genuine emotional connection and interpersonal skills.
To address this, we need to consciously balance technology use with real-world engagement. Simple actions, like setting “no-phone” times during meals or social events, can help restore meaningful conversation. Technology should serve as a tool to enhance our lives, not replace the human bonds that give them richness.
In conclusion, while we embrace the benefits of technological progress, we must not let it erode the essence of human interaction—the warmth and understanding that only come from being truly present with one another.
写作思路：
1. 首段描述图片内容，直接点明核心矛盾（科技导致现实隔离）。
2. 第二段展开分析：先承认科技的好处，再转折指出问题（影响面对面交流、情感联结）。
3. 第三段提解决方法：强调主动平衡，举例具体可行的小措施。
4. 结尾总结，重申核心观点——科技不应取代真实人际纽带。
答题技巧：
| 环节 | 关键动作 |
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| 审题 | 1分钟内看清图片细节，抓住核心冲突（对比/矛盾） |
| 结构 | 三段式：描述→分析→评论/建议 |
| 主题句 | 每段首句直接亮观点，不绕弯子 |
| 词汇 | 用2-3个高级替换词（如depict代替show，erode代替destroy） |
| 时间控制 | Part A 15分钟，Part B 30分钟，留5分钟检查 |
高频考点：
模板句式（开头/结尾备用）：
蒙题口诀（时间紧时）：
1. 应用文格式不对全完蛋，先框好称呼结尾再填内容。
2. 大作文第一句必须扣图，最后一句必须升华到人生/社会。
3. 字数不够例子凑，字数超时删副词。