2012江苏高考英语作文真题
题目内容:
请以“Action Speaks Louder than Words”为题,结合生活中的事例,写一篇150词左右的短文,说明“行胜于言”的道理。
满分范文:
标题:Action Speaks Louder than Words
We’ve all heard the saying, but real life hits harder. My clas*ate Li Hua taught me this. He never bragged about helping others, but every weekend he’d quietly volunteer at the nursing home — cleaning rooms, chatting with the elderly. No speeches, just action.
Then there’s environmental protection. Some folks shout slogans yet litter freely. But in our school, students launched a “No Waste” campaign by actually sorting trash and recycling paper. Results? Less garbage, more awareness.
Actions build trust. Promises can be empty, but doing things proves your heart. Want to change something? Don’t just talk. Step up and do it. That’s how the world moves forward.
评分标准要点:
怎么拿高分:
1. 开头直接亮观点,别绕弯子
2. 例子用生活化小事,别编假大空
3. 结尾用一句话重申主题,干脆利落
说完。