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升学考试 2011年高考英语作文题目回顾,看看当年满分范文长啥样

2011年高考英语作文题目回顾,看看当年满分范文长啥样

新课标 I 卷真题:假设你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到困难想找学校辅导中心帮忙。得预约,写信要点包括:自我介绍、求助内容、约定时间。词数100左右,结尾已给出。来,看范文:Dear Sir / Madam,Look forwa...

新课标 I 卷真题:假设你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到困难想找学校辅导中心帮忙。得预约,写信要点包括:自我介绍、求助内容、约定时间。词数100左右,结尾已给出。

来,看范文:

Dear Sir / Madam,

Look forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

啊,就这?这范文太简略了,网上流传的“优秀范文”可能就只提供了开头和结尾的模板。但实际考试中,你得自己填内容。比如根据考题:自我介绍可以说“I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student attending your summer course.”;求助内容可以具体写“I have trouble understanding some lectures due to language barriers and need help with my assignments.”;约定时间就提“Please let me know when you're available. My email is and my phone is 12345678.” 这样凑够词数。

新课标 II 卷真题:假设你是李华,给喜欢的Global Mirror周报写意见信,庆祝它创刊五周年。要点:说明你是忠实读者;夸它两个优点(国内外新闻、名人成功故事);建议它加英语学习指导文章。词数100左右,开头已写好。

这个有完整范文,瞅瞅:

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

当年满分作文啥样?看评分标准就知道

满分档(21-25分)得做到:任务全完成,要点全覆盖,语法和词汇用得多且准,错误极少,连接词用得好让文章紧凑。简单说就是:别跑题,要点写全,句子玩花样,单词用高级的,逻辑通顺

想让作文炫起来?学几个句式套路:

把简单句升级。比如“The bell is ringing now.”可以改成倒装“There goes the bell.”

多用从句。比如把两句话“The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.”合成一句定语从句“The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of.”

玩转非谓语。比如“When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.”换成“On his arrival ,please give me an e-mail.”

写的时候注意这些坑

字数卡死在80到120之间,多了少了都扣2分。先审题,别急,把要点、人称、时态搞清楚。在草稿上列个小提纲,把要用的高级词和句型先码好。写完了必须检查一遍,看有没有拼写、时态的错误。卷面整洁点,别涂得乱七八糟。

书信作文万能结构

开头:直接点明写信目的和你是谁。

中间:分点说事。用“First,... Secondly,...”或者“The reason is that...”把要点展开。

结尾:总结或提出期望,然后标准结尾“Yours, Li Hua”。

拿来就能用的高分词句

开头套路:I'm writing to... / I'd like to...

夸优点套路:I appreciate/enjoy... mainly for the following reasons.

提建议套路:I suggest/recommend that...

表期待套路:I hope that... / I look forward to...

连接词:so that, which, besides, however

行了,2011年的作文题和满分范文的门道就这些。照着这个标准写,多用复杂句和高级词,别超字数,卷面干净,分数不会低。

阅读提示

建议先抓核心知识点,再看例题或表达方式,复习时可结合范文素材和作文栏目一起使用。