完整演讲稿范文:
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
解析:
1. 作文套路:题目形式是“演讲稿”,开头和结尾固定给你了,中间需要你填。内容框架分三块:为啥要倾听(表示尊重、增进理解、改善关系)、谁需要倾听(家长对孩子、老师对学生、同学之间)、怎么倾听(自己发挥,写两三点)。官方范文就是按这个框架走的,先讲重要性,再分角色说好处,最后提具体建议。
2. 评分标准(高分关键):江苏卷作文25分,占120分总分的近21%。想拿高分(21-25分档),评分标准明确要求“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇”,并且允许“为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”的些许错误。但别瞎用复杂句子!有的学生为了高分每句话都硬塞复合句、倒装句,结果文章难懂又别扭。真正有用的“复杂结构”不一定是长句,比如:
加个恰当的形容词副词(It turned into a fierce quarrel)。
用同位语代替定语从句(Li Jiang, Su Hua's classmate, is also to blame)。
用评注性状语开头(To be honest, it was Su's fault)。范文里“Show your respect...; show you are interested...; be open-minded...”这种并列结构也是清晰有力的好句子。
3. 避坑提醒:作文里不准提你的学校和个人姓名。词数要求150左右,开头结尾给的词不算。别光翻译题目给的要点,要适当发挥。