2009年考研英语大作文真题题目是“网络的近与远”,图面是一张蜘蛛网里坐着很多人上网。
审题的核心就两点:
1. 看懂图:蜘蛛网就是互联网的象征,它把人都连在里面了,但仔细看,这些人在网上各干各的,互相之间是隔开的。这就引出了“近与远”的矛盾:网络拉近了虚拟距离,却可能疏远了现实关系。
2. 抓准矛盾:别跑题去大谈特谈人口爆炸或者水污染。重点必须放在网络带来的这种双重性上——既是连接工具,也是隔离屏障。
高分范文要点(直接套用句式):
开头描述图:“The past decade has witnessed an increasingly inseparable relationship between man and Internet. As is vividly depicted in the picture, within a stretching spider web many people are surfing on line... However, it seems rather ironic to present people separated from each other by the spider web when they attempt to communicate.”
分析矛盾:
近的方面:“On the one hand, there is no denying that Internet is currently one of the most efficient media used for interpersonal communication.”(举例:上BBS、上网课、发邮件、网购砍价)。
远的方面:“But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain face-to-face contact...”
结尾观点:“Therefore, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from addiction.”(点明发明网络是为了连接和便利,而不是设置障碍)。
写作避坑提醒:
别写“OK, this is what I want to say.”或者“Do you agree with me?”这种大白话,跟议论文画风不符,显得很愣。
确保每句话都围绕“网络的双重性”这个主题来写,别扯到别的污染或者问题上。