标题：A Memorable Summer Camp
（就按这个标题写，千万别自己瞎编标题，这是格式分）
作文正文（直接抄这个结构，稳拿高分）：
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I'm writing to tell you about the English Summer Camp I attended last month. （开场白，万能句）
The camp, which was held in our school from July 10th to 20th, was truly unforgettable. （定语从句，显示语法） We had a variety of activities, not only practicing spoken English with foreign teachers but also joining interesting discussions and games. （not only...but also...高级连接词） What impressed me most was the English speech contest. Though I was nervous at first, I managed to overcome my shyness and won the second prize. （“What impressed me most”高级主语从句，“managed to”好词）
Through this camp, I have not only improved my English but also made many new friends. （再次强调not only...but also...，深化主题） I realized that practice is the key to language learning. （点明道理，升华结尾）
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. （结尾万能句）
Yours,
Li Hua
高分秘诀 & 避坑清单：
1. 必须用题目给的格式和名字：让写书信就得有“Dear...”、“Yours,”，名字用“Li Hua”。乱改格式直接扣分。
2. 字数卡死90-110字：少了扣分，多了浪费时间。数好行数，差不多就停。
3. 开头结尾直接套模板：就用上面范文那两句，省时省力还不出错。
4. 中间内容“老三段”：总起句→展开两三个活动→感想收获。结构清晰比花里胡哨重要。
5. 炫技句式至少用3个：定语从句（which/who）、状语从句（when/though）、强调句（It is...that...）、被动语态，想办法塞进去。范文里划线的直接背。
6. 连接词是命根子：Besides, However, What's more, In my opinion...必须用，显得有逻辑。
7. 字迹是隐形分数：写工整！写错了划一条线，别涂黑疙瘩。
8. 绝对别踩的坑：
坑1：乱跑题——题目是“夏令营”，你就别扯帮老奶奶过马路。紧扣主题！
坑2：中式英语——别把“I very like it”这种写上去。用“I like it very much”都更安全。
坑3：从头到尾简单句——全是I do... I think... 这种，分数上不去。必须用上面说的复杂句。
坑4：时态混乱——写过去的事，通篇过去时（一般过去时、过去进行时）。检查！
坑5：不检查拼写：肯定有笔误，最后两分钟必须检查一遍。特别是第三人称单数、名词复数。
评分标准潜规则：
拿来就能用的套路句：
which was... （非限定定语从句，插进去解释）
Not only did I..., but I also... （倒装句，一用就提气）
It was... that... （强调句，突出你的重点）
There is no doubt that... （万能观点句）
高频考点词：
improve, develop, benefit, realize, communicate, participate in, be impressed by, overcome (difficulties), gain/earn experience.
照这个写，避开那些坑，分数肯定比瞎写高一大截。