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升学考试 2011上海高考英语作文范文高分句式整理

2011上海高考英语作文范文高分句式整理

一、高分句式(直接背,往里套)1. 开头万能钩子:"There is a growing awareness that…"(现在人们越来越意识到…)"When it comes to…, opinions vary from person ...

一、高分句式(直接背,往里套)

1. 开头万能钩子:

  • "There is a growing awareness that…"(现在人们越来越意识到…)
  • "When it comes to…, opinions vary from person to person."(一提到…,大家看法各异)
  • 2. 转折亮观点:

  • "While it is true that…, we cannot ignore the fact that…"(虽然…没错,但咱不能忽略…)
  • 3. 举例填充内容:

  • "Take… as an example, …"(拿…来说,…)
  • "This point can be illustrated by the fact that…"(这事儿就能说明)
  • 4. 结尾上价值:

  • "Only by… can we…"(只有…我们才能…)
  • "It is high time that we…"(现在是时候…了)
  • 二、套路模板(三段式,填空就行)

  • 第一段:Nowadays, 现象/话题 is becoming increasingly significant. (直接用开头句式1或2)
  • 第二段:On the one hand, 好处/观点A. For instance, 例子. On the other hand, 问题/观点B. What’s more, 进一步说明.
  • 第三段:In my opinion, 你的观点. Therefore, 建议或展望(套用结尾句式).
  • 三、高频考点词(写作文必塞)

  • 环保类:sustainable development(可持续发展)、environmentally friendly(环保的)
  • 社会类:social responsibility(社会责任)、mutual understanding(相互理解)
  • 学习类:critical thinking(批判性思维)、practical skills(实践能力)
  • 四、评分标准干货

  • 内容分(7分):要点写全,别跑题
  • 结构分(6分):分段清楚,逻辑顺
  • 语言分(7分):句式花样多,别老用简单句,拼写语法不能错
  • 五、满分范文示例(带标题)

    Title: On Cultivating Reading Habits

    Currently, there is a growing awareness that reading plays a vital role in personal growth. When it comes to methods of reading, opinions vary from person to person.

    Some believe that reading extensively broadens our horizons. Take classic novels as an example, they offer insights into different cultures. However, others argue that reading without selection may waste valuable time. While it is true that random reading has its drawbacks, we cannot ignore the importance of diverse knowledge.

    In my view, balancing extensive and selective reading is key. Only by combining breadth and depth can we truly benefit from books. Let’s make reading a lifelong habit.

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