题目回顾:
请你为学校英语报写一篇短文,介绍一位你敬佩的志愿者。内容包括:
1. 志愿者的基本信息;
2. 主要的志愿活动;
3. 你敬佩他/她的原因。
满分范文
Title: The Volunteer I Admire Most
The person I admire most is our school's library volunteer, Li Ming, a senior student from Class 3.
What makes him special is his dedication. For over two years, rain or shine, he has spent every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon organizing books and helping students find materials. His main task involves sorting returned books and guiding newcomers, but he often goes the extra mile by creating reading lists for different interests.
The reason I truly look up to him is his attitude. He once said, "A well-organized book is a door waiting to be opened." His patience and warmth have turned the once-quiet library into a welcoming place for learning. He shows us that volunteer work isn't just about giving time; it's about sharing passion and making a real difference in our community.
Li Ming proves that the greatest impact often comes from the *allest, most consistent acts of kindness.
评分标准干货:
1. 内容要点:必须全(介绍人物、活动、原因),少一个扣分。
2. 语言质量:语法、词汇用对,高级句加亮(如非谓语、定语从句)。
3. 结构逻辑:分段清楚,连接词用上(What makes him...、The reason...)。
4. 卷面字数:100词左右,写超了不扣,但别太短。
直接能用的套路句:
写完对照要点数一数,字数够了就停笔。