全国卷:你校将举办音乐节,写邮件邀请外教参加;
新高考I卷:写一篇庆祝校报创刊十周年的短文;
北京卷:二选一,介绍中国传统节日/给因疫情滞留的英国朋友写邮件。
套模板能拿高分吗?
能保底,难高分。直接用万能句会显得生硬,阅卷老师一眼就能看出来。想拿高分得这么干:
1. 开头结尾别照抄,把题目关键词揉进去。比如写音乐节,开头别用“I'm writing to...”,改成“Our school music festival is around the corner, and we'd love to invite you to join the fun!”
2. 中间段落准备3-4个灵活句式,根据题目换动词和名词。比如环保类、文化类、活动类各备一个核心句式。
3. 硬套不如会改装:把“Every coin has two sides”改成“While technology brings convenience, it also raises privacy concerns”——立马贴题。
高分口诀:
• 开头30词内亮观点,别绕弯
• 中间每段首句必须是要点句
• 结尾必须重现题目关键词
• 字数必须比要求多30词左右(比如要求100词就写130)
高频考点:
• 申请信/邀请信/建议信(记牢格式)
• 现象分析(利弊/原因/解决方案)
• 传统文化介绍(春节/中秋/书法)
• 图表描述(上升rise/下降decline/保持稳定remain stable)
蒙题底线技巧:
遇到完全看不懂的作文题,死守这个结构:
第一段:重复题目要求+“I think this is meaningful because...”
第二段:“On one hand... On the other hand...”
第三段:“In conclusion, I believe...”
至少保证结构分拿满。
满分范文示例(全国卷音乐节邮件):
标题:Join Our Music Festival!
Dear Mr. Smith,
Our campus is buzzing with excitement for the upcoming Spring Music Festival on June 15th, and we sincerely invite you to be our special guest.
The festival will feature student bands, traditional Chinese instrument performances, and even a singing contest. As our beloved English teacher, your presence would mean a lot to us. You could enjoy the show at the auditorium from 3 PM to 6 PM, and there'll be a tea break where you can chat with students.
Please let us know by Friday if you can make it. We can't wait to share this musical celebration with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
评分标准要点:
• 内容完整(覆盖所有题目要点)→占40%
• 语言质量(词汇丰富度、语法准确性)→占40%
• 结构连贯(分段合理、连接词使用)→占20%
• 加分项:使用2-3个高级词汇(如buzzing with excitement替代very happy)、1个复合句(如定语从句/条件句)
• 致命伤:字数不足(直接降档)、完全离题、抄袭阅读段落
记住:模板是骨架,题目关键词才是血肉。改几个词比全篇硬套至少多拿5分。