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浙江高考2012年英语作文范文和评分标准

题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你校学生课余活动情况。请给他写一封回信,介绍你们的主要活动并谈谈你的感受。范文:Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. You

题目: 假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom来信询问你校学生课余活动情况。请给他写一封回信,介绍你们的主要活动并谈谈你的感受。

范文:

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about our after-school activities. Now let me tell you something.

We have various activities. Many students join sports clubs like basketball or football. Others prefer art groups, such as painting or music. There are also volunteer teams that help in the community. These activities are usually held twice a week.

My favorite activity is the reading club. We share books and discuss ideas every Friday. It not only relaxes me but also broadens my mind. I think these activities make our school life colorful and help us develop skills.

Hope this answers your question. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

评分标准干货:

1. 内容要点分(6分):

  • 介绍主要活动(至少两项)→ 给分。
  • 谈谈个人感受或看法→ 给分。
  • 漏要点扣分,废话不加分。
  • 2. 语言应用分(8分):

  • 语法、词汇用对→ 加分。
  • 句型有变化、用点高级词→ 加分。
  • 错误多、句子幼稚→ 扣分。
  • 3. 结构连贯分(4分):

  • 信件格式正确(开头、结尾、分段)→ 给分。
  • 逻辑通顺,连接词用上(如“also”、“not only...but also”)→ 加分。
  • 乱写一气→ 扣分。
  • 总分18分,按这个标准拆开算。

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