标题:On Making Friends
When it comes to making friends, different people hold different views. Some believe that friends should share similar interests, while others argue that opposites attract. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former opinion.
There are several reasons for my preference. First and foremost, friends with similar hobbies can have more topics to talk about and more activities to enjoy together, which strengthens their bond. For instance, if both are fond of basketball, they can play and discuss games, making their friendship deeper. Moreover,相似的性格和价值观能减少摩擦,让友谊更长久。A person who values honesty naturally gets along better with someone likewise.
However, we cannot deny the value of friends who are different from us. They might offer us new perspectives and help us grow. But for close friendship, common ground is the foundation.
In conclusion, while appreciating friends with differences, I prefer to make friends who are similar to me, because it brings more joy and understanding to the relationship.
【模板拆解】
第一段:开门见山表观点
套路句:When it comes to ______, different people hold different views. Some believe that ______, while others argue that ______. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/the latter opinion.
第二段:原因一二三
套路句:There are several reasons for my preference. First and foremost, ______. For instance, ______. Moreover, ______.
第三段:让步句(显客观)
套路句:However, we cannot deny the value of ______. They might ______. But for ______, ______ is the foundation.
第四段:总结重复观点
套路句:In conclusion, while appreciating ______, I prefer to ______, because it ______.
【高频考点词伙】
hold different views
as far as I am concerned
first and foremost
for instance
strengthen their bond
get along better with
cannot deny the value of
offer new perspectives
in conclusion
【评分标准踩分点】
1. 内容完整,观点明确。
2. 结构清晰,分段合理(四段保平安)。
3. 用了高级连接词(首先、其次、然而、总之)。
4. 有几个像样的复杂句(定语从句、状语从句)。
5. 词汇不low(用preference而不是like)。
6. 字迹工整,别写飞起来。