2014年新课标I卷真题回顾
作文题:假设你是李华,学校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友Peter写信约稿,并说明要求。
要点:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:400词左右;4.交稿时间:6月28日前。
高分套路直接甩
1. 结构不散架:“开头点目的 + 中间分点说 + 结尾表期待”是铁律。这篇就用“写信目的(约稿)→栏目说明→内容要求→字数时间→感谢期待”。
2. 句式别太柴:同一个意思换着说。别老用“please”,换成“I’d like to ask you to...”、“It would be great if you could...”。
3. 逻辑显出来:用firstly、besides、finally把要点串起来,阅卷老师一眼扫过去清楚。
4. 扣题别跑偏:题目里的“栏目介绍、稿件内容、长度、时间”四个点,一个都不能少,少了就扣分。
2014年这篇满分范文长这样
Title: A Letter of Request
Dear Peter,
I’m writing on behalf of our school’s English newspaper to ask for your help. Our “Foreign Cultures” section is planning to introduce American festival customs and daily life of middle school students, and we think you’re the perfect person to contribute an article.
Here are some specific requirements. Firstly, the article should focus on typical American festivals and how teenagers celebrate them. Besides, sharing some aspects of your school life would make it more vivid. The article needs to be around 400 words. Finally, please submit it before June 28th.
We believe your writing will be a valuable addition to our section. Thank you in advance and I’m looking forward to your wonderful work.
Yours,
Li Hua
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