差在这三点,一看就懂:
1. 结构套路:范文永远是“描述图表-分析原因-总结趋势/影响”三段式,自己写容易扯远,比如大谈个人感受。
2. 用词和句式:范文用“As is revealed in the chart...”开头,自己写可能直接“The chart shows...”;范文用“This phenomenon can be attributed to...”分析原因,自己写可能只会“Because...”。
3. 扣题深度:范文结尾会联系社会发展(如“reflects broader trends in...”),自己写可能就简单重复数据。
拿2013年真题(大学生*情况)举例:
自己写可能:“Many college students do part-time jobs. They want to earn money. It’s good for them.”
范文范本:“The bar chart clearly illustrates the proportion of students taking part-time jobs across four university years. This trend is primarily driven by the growing need to gain practical experience and alleviate financial burdens. Such a phenomenon highlights students’ increasing awareness of preparing for future careers.”
直接套的句式(背完就用):
开头:“As is depicted in the chart, [数据/现象].”
原因:“Two major factors contribute to this: firstly, ...; secondly, ...”
结尾:“In summary, this trend mirrors a broader shift in [社会/教育领域].”
评分标准核心:
内容对不对(别跑题)
结构清不清(三段式最稳)
词句有没有亮点(换几个高级词,比如用“significant”代替“big”)
错误多不多(语法、拼写尽量少错)
完了。