2012年江苏高考英语书面表达题目是：根据一段关于“恐惧”的英文材料（讲述一个孩子在黑暗中的恐惧经历及感悟），以约150个词写一篇短文，内容包括：1.概括该孩子的经历及感悟；2.谈谈你自己类似的经历或看法。
怎么写才能高分
一、评分标准核心
内容全：两个要点必须都覆盖，少一个扣分就狠。
结构清：分段写！第一段概括材料，第二段讲自己经历/看法。
语言亮：多用两三个高级词汇、从句、非谓语，但别硬拗出错。
卷面净：字丑没事，工整就行，涂改要少。
二、高分套路句式（拿来就用）
开头概括材料：“The passage narrates a child’s experience of... and his realization that...”
转自己经历：“Similarly, I once went through a situation where...”
讲感悟：“This experience taught me that fear is often... / What I learn is that...”
三、避坑指南
别抄材料原句！必须 paraphrase。
自己经历部分别编太扯，简单真实即可。
字数严格控制，超太多或不够都扣分。
满分范文示例
Title: Facing Fear
The passage tells a story of a child who was extremely afraid of the dark. After being left alone in a dark room and calming down, he eventually realized that fear mainly comes from the unknown and our own imagination.
I had a similar experience. When I first learned to swim, I was terrified of deep water. My fear, I later understood, stemmed not from the water itself, but from my mind picturing all sorts of dangers. Once I gathered courage to try, guided by my coach, I found the water was actually supportive. This incident made me believe that fear is often a mental barrier. Confronting it directly is the first and most crucial step to overcoming it. What we imagine is usually far more frightening than the reality.