第一节作文范文（书信）
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to tell you that I won’t be able to travel to Yunnan with you in July as we planned. I recently injured my foot, and the doctor advised me to rest and avoid long trips for now. I feel really sorry about this sudden change and hope it doesn’t cause too much inconvenience for you. To make sure we still get to enjoy the trip together, I suggest we postpone it to August. By then, my foot should be fully healed, and we can have a great time exploring Yunnan. Let me know if this new schedule works for you. Looking forward to our adventure!
Yours,
Joe
翻译：
亲爱的克里斯，
我写信是想告诉你，我无法按原计划在七月和你一起去云南旅行了。我最近脚受伤了，医生建议我目前要休息，避免长途旅行。对于这个突然的变化我感到非常抱歉，希望不会给你造成太多不便。为了确保我们仍然能一起享受这次旅行，我建议我们将行程推迟到八月。到那时，我的脚应该完全康复了，我们可以好好探索云南。请告诉我这个新的时间安排是否适合你。期待我们的冒险！
你的，
第二节作文范文（短文）
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report about the issue. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and handed the report to him. He listened to our suggestions and agreed that the entrance needed improvement. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there, and everyone feels much more convenient.
翻译：
我们学校的自行车停放处有个问题。我发现入口很小，几乎被堵住了。于是我和同学们讨论了一下，并写了一份关于这个问题的报告。然后我们去校长办公室见了校长，把报告交给了他。他听取了我们的建议，并同意入口需要改进。不久之后，停车处开了第二个入口。现在在那里停放自行车很容易，大家都觉得方便多了。
评分标准参考（2014年适用，当前标准可能有调整）
高考英语作文评分通常分五档：
写作口诀：
1. 要点覆盖全： 题目要求的点一个别漏。
2. 结构要清晰： 开头、主体、结尾分明，用连接词（如so, then, afterwards）。
3. 词汇语法往上靠： 用你最有把握的“高级”词和句型，哪怕有小错也比简单句强。
4. 字迹工整： 卷面整洁绝对加分。