题目:2010年全国卷I
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom写信询问你高考后的暑假计划。请你回信,描述你的计划并说明理由。
【万能模板直接套用】
标题:我的暑假“三步走”
Hey Tom,
Got your letter. Here’s my plan for the summer after Gaokao—I call it the “Three-Step Move”.
Step 1: Hit the Road
Right after exams, I’m packing my bag for a trip. Not fancy tourism, just hopping on a train to see my grandparents in the countryside. Why? To shake off the study stress and breathe real air. Plus, helping them with farm work beats gym any day.
Step 2: Skill Up
Mid-summer, I’ll dive into a computer course. Not for fun, but because tech is everywhere now. Learning to code or design a basic website might give me a head start in uni. Practical stuff, you know?
Step 3: Give Back
Before uni starts, I’m volunteering at a local library. Helping kids with reading or organizing books. Reason? Gaokao made me realize how much I’ve taken from others—time to give a little back.
That’s it. No crazy parties, just mixing rest, learning and helping out. What’s your summer look like?
Yours,
Li Hua
【模板拆解口诀】
开头直入:不用“Thank you for your letter”,直接“Got your letter”或“About your question”。
分点说计划:用“Step 1/2/3”或“First, Next, Finally”清晰分段,每段必有“具体行动 + 简单理由”。
理由接地气:理由挂钩“减压”“实用”“回报”,避免“开阔视野”等空话。
结尾反问:结尾甩一句“What’s your plan?”自然收尾,不拖沓。
句式套用:
计划句:“I’m going to... / I’ll dive into... / I plan to...”
理由句:“Why? Because... / The reason is... / Not for fun, but for...”
【高频考点】
1. 书信格式:开头称呼(Dear Tom)、结尾署名(Yours, Li Hua)必须齐全。
2. 内容要点:必须涵盖“计划”和“理由”,缺一不可。
3. 动词时态:主要用将来时(will, be going to)或现在时表计划(I’m packing)。
4. 连接词:使用But, Plus, Because, Before 等小词,不用高级连接词。
【评分标准关键】
内容分:覆盖所有要点,理由合理即拿满。
结构分:分段清晰,逻辑顺序明显。
语言分:语法错误少,用词基本准确即可,不需要高级词汇。
【拿来就能用的套路句】
开头切入:Speaking of my plan... / About the summer...
引出理由:The main reason is simple: ... / Why? Two words: ...
自然结尾:That’s pretty much my plan. / So, that’s how I’ll roll this summer.