就是让你参加一个“英语学习师生座谈会”,要你根据给的表写一篇发言稿。发言稿得讲清楚你自己的英语学习情况,还得给学校的英语教学提点建议。
题目给的开头结尾都固定了,就中间让你自己发挥。
怎么写才能高分
1. 内容别跑题:题目给了两个部分,一是你自己的学习情况,二是对学校的建议。两样都得写,别只写一个。阅卷专家说今年这作文开放度比往年高,但很多人没适应好这种半开放性作文,导致优秀作文少了。
2. 结构要清楚:开头就用题目给的“Dear teacher and schoolmates...”,结尾也用“Thank you for listening”。中间分两段,一段讲自己怎么学英语(比如每天背20个单词、听英语节目这些),另一段提建议(比如建议多给机会用英语、多搞英语活动)。阅卷组强调别写成“四不像”,写啥文体就得像啥文体。
3. 词句别太low:多用点像“naturally”、“sources”、“opportunities”、“grasp”这种词。别老用初中词汇,但也不用硬凹特别生僻的。
4. 字数卡准了:题目要求150词左右。写太少肯定扣分,写超了可能啰嗦,自己看着办。
5. 提建议要实在:别光喊口号“应该改进教学”,得像范文里那样写具体点,比如“多推荐有趣的书刊”、“多办英语竞赛和英语节”。这样显得你真有想法。
附:2010年江苏卷高考英语满分作文(参考范文)
题目就是上面说的那个座谈会发言稿,以下是当年的一篇满分范文:
Dear teacher and schoolmates,
It’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now, I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.
背这篇范文没用,但可以看看人家怎么把学习方法和建议写得又具体又不啰嗦。
最后叨叨一句:2010年江苏高考英语作文总体得分和去年差不多,但优秀作文就是少了点,主要吃亏在书面表达和半开放作文的适应性上。你按上面几点搞,别犯这些错,分数应该差不了。