根据以下提示,描述你心目中的理想职业。
(1)职业是什么;(2)为什么选择这个职业;(3)为此你正在做什么准备。
词数120-150。
2013上海高考英语作文满分范文
My Ideal Career
Everyone has a dream career, and mine is to become a environmental scientist.
I’ve always been deeply concerned about the pollution problems in our city. The *oggy skies and polluted rivers make me realize that protecting the environment is urgent. As an environmental scientist, I could research clean energy solutions and help develop policies to reduce pollution. This job would allow me to contribute directly to a greener world.
To prepare for this career, I’m focusing on science subjects, especially chemistry and biology. I also read articles about renewable energy and join school eco‑clubs. Volunteering in local clean‑up activities has given me hands‑on experience. I believe that with solid knowledge and practical skills, I can turn my ideal into reality.
(词数:128)
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